Re: swift and sure?
May 05, 2004 08:20 PDT
In Boston, we get more than our share of John Kerry stories, and the matter
of how to describe the boat he commanded in Vietnam does come up regularly.
I don't think anyone has bothered to set a style rule on it.
The last time I handled a story on it, I did some checking and was satisfied
that Swift was the US Navy's designation for the vessel. Frankly, I don't
see why that should not be treated as a proper name, as we would treat the
nickname of an Air Force plane (Falcon, Hornet, etc.).
That being said, a check of our clips shows we have been pretty consistent
about using it in lower-case. My reservation about that is that the patrol
boat was not merely fast, a boat that moved swiftly, but rather a particular
configuration of patrol boat, which the Navy named a Swift boat.
But I operate on the other side of the room, so I have not had the occasion
to make that argument in my own shop.
-- Jim Franklin
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That’s often a great solution, Alex, but I think "swift boat" is coming
up often enough that we can't avoid the term, so it warrants a style
-- Peter Fisk
The Tampa Tribune
Cruden, Alex wrote:
Why not tell readers in their own language what sort of boat it was?
Skip any versions of "swift," unless needed to explain a military quote.
-- Alex Cruden, Detroit Free Press
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