Welcome Guest!
 Previous Message All Messages Next Message 
RE: Retirement award (UNCLASSIFIED)  Moore, Kevin S CIV USA MEDCOM AMEDDCS
 Jun 30, 2010 05:26 PDT 

Classification: UNCLASSIFIED
Caveats: NONE

SGT Partridge,

For a MSM, whether for retirement or otherwise, the achievement blocks
should be as with any other award. Based on your unit guidance you
can either use bullets or narrative. Just make sure the data is
quantitative. For the citation, normally it can only be six lines for a
MSM but for retirement, they normally will change that standard. The
narrative below is a simple one but take the structure and use it for
your previous 10 years of service. Once you have it complete, I would be
happy to take a look at it and offer some suggestions. This was a big
part of my job for the past 7 years (prior to my retirement). Just let
me know.

For exceptionally meritorious service while assigned as a Counter Rocket
Artillery Mortar Sense and Warn Team Leader from 10 August 2007 through
2 Jan 2008. As a member of the Multinational Division Center South Sense
and Warn section at Camp Bravo, Ad Diwaniyah, Iraq, SGT Rock played a
vital role in the success of the mission. When an IDF attack disabled
the main generators powering the Tactical Operations Center and the
Sense and Warn system Lightweight Counter Mortar Radars, SGT Rock took
immediate action. With no radar coverage and still under Red conditions,
SGT Rock moved to the Special Forces compound and completely assembled
and activated their Counter Mortar Radar. This provided Camp Bravo with
temporary Radar coverage for 12 hours until the main generators were
repaired. SGT Rock's dedication and devotion to duty is in keeping with
the finest traditions of the Army and reflects great credit upon
himself, the Strike First Battallion, and the United States Army.

Mr Kevin Moore

-----Original Message-----
From: SGT Partridge [mailto:tammyjo-@yahoo.com]
Sent: Tuesday, June 29, 2010 6:52 PM
To: nco_-@topica.com
Subject: Re: [NCOZ RFI] Retirement award

MSM... Im just looking for blocks 20 & 21. I dont know how it should
look/read. Thank you.

--- On Tue, 6/29/10, MEstr-@aol.com <MEstr-@aol.com> wrote:

From: MEstr-@aol.com <MEstr-@aol.com>
Subject: Re: [NCOZ RFI] Retirement award
To: nco_-@topica.com
Date: Tuesday, June 29, 2010, 6:21 AM

Type of award

-----Original Message-----
From: SGT Partridge <tammyjo-@yahoo.com>
To: nco_-@topica.com
Sent: Sun, Jun 27, 2010 8:46 pm
Subject: [NCOZ RFI] Retirement award


The NCO Zone Request for Information (RFI) System

http://www.ncohistory.com <blockedhttp://www.ncohistory.com/>


Im looking for a example/bullets for my retirement award. Any
help would be

great. Please no name or ss# if you send a attachment. Thanks.



NCO Zone RFI - Building Relevant and Ready Leaders.

Contact: in-@ncohistory.com


Classification: UNCLASSIFIED
Caveats: NONE
 Previous Message All Messages Next Message 
  Check It Out!

  Topica Channels
 Best of Topica
 Art & Design
 Books, Movies & TV
 Food & Drink
 Health & Fitness
 News & Information
 Personal Finance
 Personal Technology
 Small Business
 Travel & Leisure
 Women & Family

  Start Your Own List!
Email lists are great for debating issues or publishing your views.
Start a List Today!

© 2001 Topica Inc. TFMB
Concerned about privacy? Topica is TrustE certified.
See our Privacy Policy.